[Narrative text]
Every morning, she was went to school with her
brother, but every evening she keep meatsore. This store was my uncle has. Mom
was worked in cow farm. She was very kind, beautiful and calm, although she had
inflamed of brain.
Usually, her life was rotate in a row rotate of
earth. In the morning she and her brother get ready to school. Whereas, mom
prepare breakfast for me.
“Honey, come on , this is potato and milk for
breakfast”. Said mom with prepare some plate.
“Huu. What ! Potato, I am bored”. Said Trevor , sit
in this chair.
“You don’t say anything. You must accept. You must
say thanks, because you can eat”. Said Jully.
“Allright my handsome son, potato is nutritious
food. You must eat, in order to concentrate and activity in school.” Said mom.
Jully and Trevor were breakfast. And then we went to
school by bicycle. Don’t forget, she shaked hand, and kissed their mom’s hand.
Arrived in school Jully immediately to abreast a lesson in this day. The lesson
were chemistry and lab work. In break time Jully went to canteen with her
friends. They were Elice, Lusy, Petter, and Harry.
“Jully. You want eat? “Said Elice. She look a menu..
“I want just a
watter”. Said me.
“Why just a watter ? You don’t hungry or you are
dietarian?” Said Petter smile with me.
“You don’t say, may be she is bad mood”. Said Harry.
“I am fine , I am OK. I want just drinking watter”.
Said me. After we take a rest, we return to our classroom.
The lesson was chemistry lab work. Jully walked to laboratory. Jully cogitated diseases
her mom and her brother. Jully was cogitated some money to defrayed her school
in order to got academis title doctor. Because she wanted to made may mom
recovered. The moment when Miss Angel dispart of we in to some group.
Actually, Jully with Petter. A handsome boy, smart, but he seldom pay attention
to me. Petter just look me when she need him or when she was sad. She belief, she need that one thing . And he had got that
one thing.
“Jully, are you
fine?Why you keep silent?”Said Petter with a anxious face and prepare tools to
practice.
“I am ok. I just confuse. How a first step for
examine natriumbenzoat in this cake”. Said Jully, I try to provide a cover for
my mind.
“Why you are confuse. You are a very smart famale
university student, you are careful too”. Said Petter. But Jully keep silent
because Jully wasn’t know, Jully wasn’t said anything.
After
practiced and the lesson was end. Jully returned of her home. After she bike as far as 4.5 KM, and final she arrived to
her house. When Jully open the door, mom doesn’t came, and Trevor was sleep in
his room. And then I went to meat storehelp her uncle to sell meat.
Buyer in this day were few. All most of them bought
cow meat and sheep meat. Jully keep this store and Jully was wrote all
event this day in her diary. Jully was
all of my mind and her problem. She wrote her future was very high and like a
overcast star because she need difficult buffetings to pass trough all problem
in her life. She loved Petter too, but
She wasn’t said anything.
The door was open. They were Elice and Harry came.
They were a matching couple. They were very kind, and very interest.
“Jully. I want buy just cow mea”. Said Elice drew
near to cow meat.
“I will buy a
livers sheep. Because I want make a special food with my family”. Said Harry
with a sweets smile.
“OK.” Said Jully.
Jully was
weigh one killo cow meat and one livers sheep for them. And then Jully gave to them. And they payed all
expense. And then She closed this store. She went to her uncle to gave all money from
bought meat. Her uncle gave me some money to fill her requirement. She back to
home to take a bath, ate, helped my mom, and then sleeped.
The sun was shine in the world. She got up from her
dream. Last night, She dreamed meet her dad, and dad return to her family
again. But, this dream made she different. She feel very well. She was happy
because she will get academic title. Her academic title was doctor. This was
made Jully belief that She can make her family proud and she was helped people.
But She fell that she wasn’t one classroom again
with Petter. Because she loved him. Petter keep Jully maked her
weaked . Yeah, frozen and can’t breathe. Because he always give me new spirit.
Jully was stoped to remember him. Jully was ready to went to school with her
spirit. She kissed hands mom. And she bike.
Final,
she arrived to school. Mr. Jimmie called Jully to meet with him. He called
Jully to meet a visitor in his office. And then, she walked went along the edge to his office. In out to
her mind, she meet with her dad. Her dad
that he leaved she, mom, and trevor.
“My daughter,
How are you ?” Said Dad, he approach me. But Jully keep silent, because Jully
remember about he deranged her mom, and he leave Jully.
“Yeah, dad, I’m fine. Mom and Trevor are fine too.
Why you meet me dad ? Why dad go to my school ? Has you new wife again ?” Said
Jully.
“My fairy, I’m sorry , I leave you, mom, and your
brother. I’m so sorry , I make you broken heart. Yes, I marry with a woman, but
know I divorce her. I’m regret , I’m conscious that you, mom. And Trevor. Now,
I am success, I have cheese bussines in London. I pay all expense for your
education”. Said dad.
“OMG. Thanks dad. Mom and I are condone you. How do
you know about me ?” Said Jully.
“Coming true , Petter say all of you an your life to
me Jully. He is very near with me. He is son from my best friend, Jonson”. Said
dad.
Jully feel very happy listened all story from her
dad. Petter came, limit her. He said
congratulation for Jully. After that, he return to Jullys home to meet with mom
and Trevor. Surprisingly, Petter was
very attention to me. But actually he wasn’t interest to me. But Jully interest
to him.
“Jully. I
know you are a kind and smart girl. I know your mind and your problem. I know
your feel for me. I love you Jully, you’re excellent girl in this world “. Said Petter.
“Thank you so much Petter. You are very kind and
clever. I love you too, because I fell we have a same one thing “. Said Jully.
“I’m happy to hear that. Come on we punishment our
life with smile and happy. And you can reach your dream, you don’t say your
future is a overcast star.
Rr. Risang Ayu D.P. (15/XII-ACCEL)
11 komentar:
I have guessed it before, you will take the song from one direction, right?
One Direction - One Thing :)
But, I'm sorry if it's wrong :P
Um, Risang I little bit confused, sometimes you used word 'me' sometimes 'she'. Are you using first person or third person singular for the POV (Point Of View)?
I think that's all, Risang :)
Nice story :)
Keep it up :)
After I absorb your story and think about it,
I think the song is "One Thing - One Direction"
NB : That your hand in the picture ?? (agak bulet)
;) hehe
just because love with one direction, you tell me the song one direction ...!!!
wkwkwkwkwk ( just kidding :-)
I do not quite understand the picture, what does that mean??
Sang what the meaning of " famale" ?? What would you mean is female ??
I think this is one of the songs from one direction - one thing :D
Nice story sang ~~
The story is a little bit confusing. The word "my". Seems like you became one of the cast in the beginning, then you didn't appear in the next story. But it's great :)
Anyway, I'm not so sure about it. Is it One Thing by One Direction?
Motivated story ! :D
Our friends guess that song is : One Thing-One Direction. But I guess that song is I Have a Dream - Westlife. It's right?
Because we prohibited (from mbak Ambar) to added the title of the song into the text. I'm sorry if I'm mistake.. :)
I agree with Little Angel, note the Point Of View / subject.. Sometimes you used "I", "she" it makes me confused. Thanks :) keep fighting :D
emm, i think it looks like one song "ONE DIRECTION" because there behalf of its member and at the end i just found out that it was the answer.. heheh :)
but, i'm not sure this true..
is it "ONE THING" BY ONE DIRECTION
anyway, your story is good, can give motivasi life..
The story is very sad, but I like your story.
Is it the title of the song is "one thing", isn't it? \(´▽`)/
I think so.. One Direction - One Thing, hehe
ahahaha...
I really know about this song and this is very familiar to me...
One Direction - One Thing,,
I like the bus in the video clips
because the color is red ... ahaha
^_-
Thank you, your article is good, you have written the story well but I am confused to divide which is the writer/ she/ the person whom you write. Maybe you should be careful when choosing pronoun (kata ganti orang)... thank you...
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