Nama : Rr. Risang Ayu Dewayani Putri
No.absen : 15
Kelas : XI-Aksel
Discussion Text
Pro and Contra ;
Liberty of The Press
Living in a developing countries has both good and
bad sides. Everywhere we go now a days we see actual news from mobilephones,
television, magazine, etc. A actual news always up to date. It is make the readers or the viewer are know about
everything event in a countries, moreover in the world. Actually, there are
some people makes and deserving on the actual news, they are journalist. They
always makes and writes most actual news to give information to people. But,
last days we know that a journalist got force from a member of “TNI AU ( Indonesian National Armed
Forces )”. Because, he is take some photos from accident of aerobatics. And
then, last days we know plant of draft of a law to liberty the press. It is
make some people give their opinion, to advocating to all of journalist.
First,
a pro of liberty of the press. Some
people give their opinion that it is very advantageous. A draft of law to
liberty the press will give freedom of goverment. It will avoid of contagious
informations from many problem in Indonesian. It will alleviate from negative
sides of news.plant
Second,
a contra of liberty of the press. Some people are very disappoint with this plant. It will minatory journalist’s
life. The journalist may lose their job. It will make the people are stupid.
Because we will at the tail of trend analyts in our country or in the world.
In
conclusion the draft of law to liberty of the press is verry disadvantages to
journaliss and to people. Some people hope that this draft of law to liberty of
the press will fail. Remember that our countries are respect to the law and
respect to humans of declaration (“HAM”).
8 komentar:
Risang, you chose an interesting topic. I agree with you that we don't have to ban the activities of journalist. But, the journalist also have to know about their limit ^^
Yuhuu.. I'm coming.. :D
Your article is nice especially your topic. But in par.1 sentence "A actual news always up to date.."
it must be --> "An actual news......."
in par.3 sentence "Some people are very disappoint with this plant.." maybe your intention is "..... this plan."
plant : tanaman
:D :)
i also agree with you, because all people have the freedom.
thanks... for your comments,,,
:)
i like your topic risang, i agree with you posting.. :)
Thanks for your information.....
i hope, you will write a short story to me again..........:*
hmm over all, your text is interested enough because you choose different topic here, but maybe you should be careful to choose appropriate word, for example advantageous, maybe you can use "useful"..and i see there are some words that are not correct in typing, thank you
hihihi, your story is contra with wawan's story. your story is so long, but wawan's story is so little. I guess the song is One Direction - One Thing. I know that because i read the end sentence. "One Thing"
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